70. A Pov Story - Man Of The House Pt 1 - Liz J...

The first thing I noticed was the silence. Not the empty kind that followed Dad leaving—that silence was loud, thick with slammed doors and tears. No, this silence was… watchful.

This draft utilizes the perspective to adhere to the "POV Story" style. 70. A POV Story - Man Of The House Pt 1 - Liz J...

In a typical "Part 1," the author focuses on : The first thing I noticed was the silence